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This doesn't make any sense

Blood like breath spilling from the lips
Life like death sailing and sinking ships

Dance in the sun, forget sorrow
Embrace into one; here comes tomorrow

Feel pain and die again
Never know when to say when

Love like life
There's blood on your knife

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:44:00 PM

    congrats Christopher on a top ten win for excellent lines of poetry luv..

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/30/2012 11:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winwith this wonderful write Christopher. Elizabeth

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Christopher

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 7:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement Christopher. Love, Carol

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 5:49:00 AM

    Thought provoking write.Congratulations on your win.

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/30/2012 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:10:00 AM

    Congratulations Christopher (catching up after my week away so sorry if I'm late) x

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/30/2012 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 11:55:00 AM

    Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Keep them coming Christopher. Love, Carol

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/26/2012 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 6:35:00 AM

    Very nicely done...economical, clearly stated, creative.

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/26/2012 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 2:09:00 AM

    Very well written Christopher,good poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/26/2012 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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