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Circular Motion

Bleeding, living, dying
Hurting, loving, crying

Emotional distortion
Such a tumultuous portion

Humans in transition
On display, on a mission

Failure, success
One may only guess

Overall it’s underneath
After all it’s all belief

Stuck in motion
Inevitable devotion

Despite what some may feel
We all whirl around the wheel

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Basic cosmological facts poetically and concisely expressed...

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/26/2012 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 12:47:00 AM

    Good set of descriptive rhyming couplets here. Glad I read this.

    Stones Avatar Christopher Stones Date: 1/26/2012 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.