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Loves regrets

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Loves regrets

As pure as a frozen waterfall 
Dissolving in spring
My winter heart melted at your touch 
I gave you my all 
I sparkled like effervescent water

My youth blossomed 
Like springs dawning 
Filled with light and joy
My soul I dedicated to you
I bled for you

Like a red, red rose unfolds its bud
At the warmth of the sun
I longed for your embrace 
Your ardent advances-
Your deep kisses reached my depths
Unveiling me – I yielded all

Your hands held my heart
So tenderly - at first
Your love grew me
I so yearned for you
My one and only - true love 

Until your longing for me 
Turned to lust-I wasn’t enough 
To gorge your appetite
You became like a darkened well
That couldn’t be filled

You grew bitter and discontent
Enraged you grabbed and destroyed-
You tore to pieces the very love you craved
Crushing it beneath your sullied feet

I lay bruised and tattered by your abuse
There is nothing left in this broken heart-
Are you satisfied? Is your longing quelled?
Look at what is left of my beauty 
You once called, your noble, red, red rose 

© Brenda V Northeast 25th Jan. 2012

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  1. Date: 1/27/2012 10:50:00 AM
    Impressive and heartfelt write Brenda!

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/27/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you : )
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:28:00 PM
    Your love grew me... passionate write Brenda, a beautiful free forms (like a fairy tale highway inside a city).

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/27/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Nette- I love your analogy : )Love, Bren
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:56:00 AM
    A great sacrifice should not be rewarded like this. Descriptive and nice, loved, bl

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/27/2012 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Bi- blessings, Bren
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:46:00 AM
    WoW! A fine piece Brenda. Beautiful description and so much feeling. Good Job. God Bless, JB Thanks so much for your enncouraging comments. God Bless, JB

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/27/2012 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Judy and likewise for your kind comments, Bless you too, Bren : )
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 5:34:00 AM
    oh, i am swooning now,brenda... lovely, sentimental imagery that makes the heart sway.. beautiful! :) huggs!

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/26/2012 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Nette, blessings, Bren
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 3:21:00 AM
    Lovely poem Brenda !!!oxox love Anne-Lise

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/26/2012 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise : ) Brenda
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 2:35:00 AM
    Thanks for your kind comments in my poem Brenda really liked this poem enjoyed reading it.......spandan

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/26/2012 3:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Spandan : ) Blessings, bren
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 12:20:00 AM
    This is a little more to read, but worth it. Very clear descriptiveness here Brenda.

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 1/26/2012 1:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert- very kind of you : ) Bren