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Perfect waist, high heel taste, buns galore, body tour.
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/26/2012 2:57:00 AM
Hmmm... sounds delectable... Terry (and thanks for the clever comment!)
James Fraser
Date: 4/26/2012 4:46:00 PM
Lovely vision indeed, really enjoyed this short piece......
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/9/2012 12:08:00 PM
Had me chuckling with this poem. No need for glasses on this one. ha ha love phyl
elizabeth wesley
Date: 2/7/2012 1:44:00 PM
Never get tired of this one, just a great tour with 9 words.
John Loving III
Date: 2/7/2012 12:14:00 PM
self servce. giving her the once over.
Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2012 3:07:00 PM
Interesting work that leaves me with questions..I no longer can wear those high heels unless I wear them seated in a wheel chair and some push me ...Sara
Dinda Minardi
Date: 2/2/2012 7:29:00 AM
This is kinda intimate, I think.. which really sweet. glad to read thi.. Enjoyed this a lot.
Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
Date: 1/31/2012 7:36:00 PM
That's for describing me so well Situation! J/K-very clever!
Black Eyed Susan
Date: 1/30/2012 6:38:00 PM
Sounds like one sexy lady! Nicely rhymed :)
The Situation
Date: 2/1/2012 9:24:00 AM
Natalie TRR
Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/30/2012 11:06:00 AM
sounds more like a dream of yours haha just kiddin. an 87 yr old man calls me hot foot. has just lost his wife, thinks he's in love with me as I walk by, the people are really nice to me here in this lil' ville, so I'm staying, retiring and writing here for free, who cares. I'm just basic, I walk 1 or 2 miles a day but hate heels, I have a 71/2 E shoe size, moccassins perfence but like the nikes, or believe it or not sketchers...:)
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 1/28/2012 11:39:00 AM
oh so cool this Monoku Situation .. great rhyme sequence to enhance that visual luv..
elizabeth wesley
Date: 1/27/2012 5:32:00 PM
Saddle up darling; I'm waiting! :)
yasmin khan
Date: 1/28/2012 9:05:00 AM
Lizzy in a situation!
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2012 2:27:00 PM
Very well done my friend. oxox love Anne-Lise
Judy Ball
Date: 1/26/2012 10:36:00 PM
Hmmmm Yes indeed a vision. Good job and very clever. God Bless,. JB
Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/25/2012 10:10:00 PM
Wow this is very clever- I enjoyed your vision, Bren : )
elizabeth wesley
Date: 1/25/2012 8:41:00 PM
Re your sweet comment: love hasn't been all that kind to me either on the other hand there have been some wonderful highs. Like bees to a flower, it somehow is irresistable when it presents itself! :) P S Do you have a name?
Date: 1/25/2012 8:53:00 PM
You can call me Situation.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/25/2012 8:07:00 PM
Cool monoku!
yasmin khan
Date: 1/25/2012 8:06:00 PM
now this is naughty!
elizabeth wesley
Date: 1/25/2012 6:39:00 PM
???? ha ha! I see a woman in this one, how about you? Nice tour you are on my friend; the description defies the imagination! Luv, Lizzie
Date: 1/26/2012 8:42:00 AM
Not a tranny!
John Rhinem
Date: 1/25/2012 4:39:00 PM
Smile ˜ Hahaha, I love the way that you took farm animals and twisted our imaginations with them; kudos ˜ John!:) ˜
The Situation
Date: 1/25/2012 4:41:00 PM
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