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His Heart She Did Twirl

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I'll call her a different name
This girl whom I thought was my dame
On holiday she went
With my money well spent
To Malta she went on a plane

Whilst there she met a waiter called Frank
In bed playing sexual pranks
This Susanna my girl
His heart she did twirl
We're engaged, and this is her thanks

I looked forward to the day she came home
With this waiter her hands on he roamed
Hey! Susanna your dumped
I hope you end up real plump
Your a dog, I should throw you a bone


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His Heart She Did Twirl

I'll call her a different name
This girl whom I thought was my dame
On holiday she went
With my money well spent
To Malta she went on a plane

Whilst there she met a waiter called Frank
In bed playing sexual pranks
This Susanna my girl
His heart she did twirl
We're engaged, and this is her thanks

I looked forward to the day she came home
With this waiter her hands on he roamed
Hey! Susanna your dumped
I hope you end up real plump
Your a dog, I should throw you a bone

Wow! a man with the final say
Our relationship ends today
I wish you the best
With your holiday zest
It's my turn to go out and play

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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest James. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:06:00 PM
    Have fun! lol...congrats James..hope all is well. BG

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:21:00 AM
    Excellent set of limericks James....congrats on your win : )

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 11:33:00 PM
    the king lives on!..congrats on your fine win, and more cheers to you for all the recent placements.. having TPS technical problems, awwwh!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:34:00 PM
    congrats on a marvelous win for exquisite poetry James ..luv..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:34:00 PM
    James~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 3:16:00 AM
    Love sweet love.....come and goes.....Wery good written James!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:10:00 PM
    YOu did GREAT, james. It's for Sydney's contest, right? I enjoyed this set! good luck in the contest (long time, no see)

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 2:54:00 PM
    Very creative write, I hope it's fiction, if not it's a bummer, love,vie