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So Many Things I Wanted to Change

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So Many Things I Wanted to Change


So many things I wanted to change when I was a young man things those belong to a wide range social to cultural,in my plan. When I was a young man changes seemed to be so easy social to cultural in my plan tried to formulate a made-easy. Changes seemed to be so easy like making a poor to sudden rich tried to formulate a made easy where every change will be within reach. Like making a poor to sudden rich I dreamt of a magic world where every change will be within reach suddenly something else did unfurl. I dreamt of a magic world but now in this middle age suddenly something else did unfurl I know those things I can't change. But now in this middle age things those belong to a wide range I know those things I can't change so many things I wanted to change. © kashinath karmakar 2012 =============000============ Placement:4th ;(January 2012) Contest:Serenity Response Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/27/2012 5:43:00 PM
    "Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending." (Maria Robinson) Congrats on a your well written win.

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:17:00 PM
    wow, a deserving win indeed. Congrats Kash!

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:06:00 PM
    excellent Kash and a hard lesson to learn aye? Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:54:00 PM
    another beauty.. another great win Kash.. always so awesome luv..

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 5:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in Nette's "Serenity Response" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:32:00 AM
    Wish you congratulation on your win the contest for this wonderful write,loved, bl

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:51:00 PM
    So clever Kashi, I can see what a clerihew is and think you did a marvellous job with the poem. The subject is full of interest and the rhyme is exceptional. Way to go! :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:37:00 PM
    you really caught the essence of that quote, Kash. EXACTLY how it is. When you get "that age" your wishes are starting to fade as you realize they will never be. I sure know that feeling. I hope you do well in the contest.Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 12:53:00 PM
    Loved reading your poetry today Kash. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 12:33:00 PM
    Well done Kash I love the form you used here, enjoyed vie

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Reads like winnning material for the contest..Good luck..Enjoyed reading this morn.Youth sometimes has idealism as its center.Sara