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On Bended Knee

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On Bended Knee


 
Stained glass windows and shattered dreams Glue the pieces of your family and strengthen all the seams Children need a ray of hope for tomorrow Miracles are granted to those on bended knee Glue the pieces of your family and strengthen all the seams Husbands and wives love each other for all eternity Miracles are granted to those on bended knee Angels will surround your family if only you believe Husbands and wives love each other for all eternity Children need a ray of hope for tomorrow Angels will surround your family if only you believe Stained glass windows and shattered dreams Written by G. Rix Francine Robert's 4 Forms/4 Themes~ Lasting Love 3rd place 1-21-12

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  1. Date: 1/28/2012 2:06:00 AM

    Dear Gwendolen, So glad you were blessed by my poems. I pray each time for guidance as to what to post. I don't mind if I don't win any prizes; it's just fun! I am doing well thank you, my dear. God is good and his strength is boundless. Will send you those cards shortly. Am continuing to pray for you. Love & God bless always, Maureen

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 5:29:00 PM

    so amazing,,,they do need a ray of hope,,we all do,,,hope you are doing great...

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 12:28:00 AM

    Congratulations Gwen on your win with this beautiful pantoum.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 10:02:00 PM

    Wonderful poem enjoyed lately, sorry myself. Wishing you congratulation on your win, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 9:35:00 PM

    Gwen, another beautiful write. Congratulations for another fantastic win, Greg

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:39:00 PM

    wow, Gwen,I just love how you decided to do your pantoum. The bended knee line is wonderful!! congratulations on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 5:22:00 PM

    Gwendolen, (Love writing your name) Awesome job again. The stained glass is such perfect imagery because of the separate pieces and colors that have to be melded---The best, Craig

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:56:00 AM

    congrats Gwendolen on a fanntastico win my friend for this excellent and exciting entry.. appeciate all your sweet words to me luv..

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 8:35:00 AM

    Such a lovely verse Gwen! Many congrats. to you!

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:18:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in Francine's ""4 forms 4 themes" contest Gwen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 1:52:00 AM

    Gwen congrats on your win, great Pantoum..David

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 10:36:00 PM

    Congratulations Gwendolen on a great win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 9:17:00 PM

    congrats Gwendolen on your third place win with this beautiful pantoum

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 1:15:00 AM

    wow! i love how you open and close it with the same line. what a beautiful prayer you sing Gwen. heard your daughter name is Mika, that's lovely! ppl rarely call my name though (LOL). thanks for the visit and good luck on the contest

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 8:10:00 PM

    very beautiful!! stay in prayer and overcome the wiles of the devil!

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 2:17:00 PM

    This is beautiful, Gwen. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 10:47:00 AM

    This is a truly wonderful Pantoum Gwen! I have only written one as well, but I have to tell you, yours is so much better than mine! I really enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon! I slept in today so I didn't get to read any for this morning, but it's just as good in the afternoon, trust me if not as good, better! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 10:44:00 AM

    ..what?!? no clerihew..? t-hehe,.A wonderful write Gwendolen.You surprice me all the time:) Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 10:28:00 AM

    What a wonderful write dear poet ! This was a great form to share this faith Gwendolen. Have yourself a wonderful week my friend...much love, james

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 8:36:00 AM

    I think this is your first ever Pantoum.You have done a wonderful job.Best wishes(No more need of the Editor):)

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 1/23/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awwww. RATS!
  1. Date: 1/23/2012 5:30:00 AM

    Your poems come like pearls on a string,lovely. :) oxox love Anne-Lise. (HA EN GOD DAG.)

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:39:00 PM

    Thanks Chris, Nette, and Brenda...this is my very first Pantoum...I call it my Toddler Pantoum! lol...thanks for stopping over..you can share in my big bowl of popcorn....?...plenty for all of us...

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:37:00 PM

    Good write Gwen. Francine should like this one.

    R. Avatar G. R. Date: 1/22/2012 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love your newest Avatar, Bob..saweeeet! You look so engrossed in what you are doing!
  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:34:00 PM

    Can take this fantastic message several different ways, including how sometimes a few shattered dreams are part of the overall package deal of family. Great job, Gwendolen.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:31:00 PM

    a song worthy of praise and familial love... in this world of technology, it is still the human/ spiritual touch that conquers all, gwenie... how utterly gracious!...:) winning huggs ..SOUP MAIL!

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:18:00 PM

    Oh this rings a strong bell in my heart- so very true- wonderful write Gwendolen