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A LOVE PEP TALK

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A LOVE PEP TALK


From the outset, I felt love and bliss in you But then, momentarily we slowed down of this feelings As we tread of our faith, can they be considerate, understanding and caring? The moon finally is at our side, brighter, guiding and consoling Although our minds they have their own faults and reservations. We’ll dance with the music naturally, willfully strong for our cause We knew, our love is destined and wrapped up as one, we promised! Both of us are survivors, battered in many ways Threats along the way true and indiscernible But we should hold on together, love each other the more While it’s worth loving each other, we should be careful and vigilant Our love is for eternity Falling out of love we cannot dare sacrifice For truly this love is great!
Entered in a contest sponsored by: Russell Sivey Contest Name: Tons of comma fun! |

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  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:51:00 PM

    Love conquers all. Thanks for the pep talk

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 5:27:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Tons Of Comma Fun" contest Dalila. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Very good work. Congratulations on your 1st place win in Russell's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:12:00 AM

    DALILA,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 11:19:00 AM

    Congratulations onyour writing and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Congrats, Dalila. Great write. Enjoyed. Nice going. All the best. hugs Ralph

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 3:09:00 AM

    congrats, wonderful winner. enjoyed. harry

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 5:07:00 PM

    Great winning work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:29:00 AM

    I really like the message you give here, Dalila, yes love isn't always a smooth road but one should still hold on to that hope and try to stay strong...beautiful message and i like your lines about the moon :D hugs to you!

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 11:58:00 AM

    I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Dalila. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 11:33:00 PM

    DAlila, for a former ESL student, your grammar is really good! There was only one word that seemed odd to me. Use of "fooling" in next to last line. What do you mean by "fooling out again?" Other than that, I think this reads wonderfully and I wish you best of luck in the challenge.