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sun and moon

sun's flaming florets unfurl morning's molten flare ... burnished sunflower moon's white bud uncurls ... its midnight magnolia blooms in soil-dark sky sun's fire petals fold ... moon's night flower illumines a bouquet of stars
by Charlotte Puddifoot 'Your Favourite Or Best Haiku' contest

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  1. Date: 11/10/2013 12:29:00 PM

    Congratulations!!! Charlotte --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 6:11:00 PM

    Nice word choices. Congrats on your feature!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 2:28:00 AM

    Short and sweet poem. nice

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:35:00 PM


  1. Date: 3/23/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Congrats.Sara

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 6:56:00 PM

    Glad to see u topped the charts with this, Char..I think I told u how much I appreciate the imagery in the last one...I can just see God handing His people a huge bouquet of stars...dazzling. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 3:31:00 PM

    Beautiful haiku, Charlotte. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, KIm

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Nice triad of haiku. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 5:45:00 PM

    congrats Charlotte, worthy winner. harry

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 4:33:00 PM

    I guess all i was seeing how this one got my attention in the second haiku.. hi Charlotte.. coming back here...reading why i picked you as my #1... love it..still... how can you not love them bouquet of stars... always..pd

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 4:44:00 PM

    Hey, in another contest I also told you this was the BEST. Congrats in PD"s contest.(the middle one is stunning)

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 8:19:00 PM

    congrats Charlotte on an awesome first place win ..delightful words lucv..

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 6:06:00 PM

    Lovely sort verse Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 5:29:00 PM

    Congratulations on your great first place win, Charlotte. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 7:50:00 AM

    Congrats on 1st place, Charlotte. Outstanding well written, well deserved win. Nice going. Enjoyed. Kudos. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 7:23:00 AM

    Beautiful! Congrats on your first place win. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 12:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your First Place in PD's Contest, Charlotte! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 10:43:00 PM

    CHARLOTTE~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 5:12:00 AM

    Charlotte, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 2:40:00 AM

    Nice one congrats on your win in this contest

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:28:00 PM

    I knew this was a good one. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:51:00 AM

    This one is unique my fav. moon's night flowers the stars, doesn't get better then this as a visual. thank you. love, vie congrats!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:09:00 AM

    Charlotte congrats on your win,"midnight magnolia" fantastic..David

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 4:03:00 PM

    charlotte, for me, this was one of the best. I absolutely LOVED it. Congratulations on the winners' circle.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:58:00 PM

    Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:32:00 PM

    congrats Charlotte on sweet success in my contest .. a splendid entry ..thankxxx..

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:23:00 PM

    ohh, i got stars in my eyes, charlotte... charming, charming piece.. sure winner for me! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 10:28:00 AM

    Wow, Charlotte- yet again, you've painted such brilliant imagery in your writes-- I love how your haiku burst to life and I enjoyed your use of alliteration here as well! Linda sure will have a tough time judging, this is another beauty!

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 9:46:00 PM

    Hey Charlotte, loved this! And I am pretty,darn tooting sure Linda will, too. The imagery is right up her ally. Me thinks, first place. I liked especially the soil-dark sky. This is sure to win! Hugs, Cyndi PS-the one thing I just noticed, I THINK, not totally sure, that the second haiku uses the second word AS the second word. So MOON may need a word in front of it. Did you see Linda's blog? I may be wrong!