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Charlie Brown

poor Charlie Brown
exposed as a clown
Lucy positions the football upright
Chuck Swings, and she yanks it from sight!

(not sure if this is a clerihew???) 

written by: Diana-Marie Bombardieri
January 22, 2012
For CLERIHEW battle contest - Poet Destroyer

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  1. Date: 1/29/2012 3:06:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Diana! Cute clerihew. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 10:52:00 PM

    Wow, you won with this! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 1:41:00 PM

    Congrats. dearest daughter on your super win, love and hugs, momv

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks mum:)
  1. Date: 1/28/2012 9:00:00 AM

    congrats Diana-Marie on a terrific win.. always loved Charlie Brown myself.. awesome piece luv..

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda-Marie:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 7:54:00 PM

    I remember this cute one!! Congratulations.

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 6:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Good job. Best regards, Jon

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jon:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Diana-Marie congrats on your win, reads like a Clerihew to me..David

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win... may ther be many more...

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Can't believe I actually won! Thanks Carol:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 7:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 6:55:00 AM

    Diana-Marie--"Oh Yeah Babe" This is perfect and fun to see another generation of soup hit pay day! Craig

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Craig! And welcome:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 6:07:00 AM

    Congrats on your fine clerihew!! Brings back childhood memories! Blessings Rhonda

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rhonda:)
  1. Date: 1/27/2012 12:59:00 AM

    DIANA, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks p.d:) WOW! Can't believe it!
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 7:00:00 PM

    Diana-Marie, You nailed it. BTW you've got great genes for this poetry stuff and it shows! Welcome---I'm new too--only one month

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 12:34:00 PM

    A very nice clerihew Diana! Now,go and win that battle,lol.Best wishes,Arild

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 6:36:00 AM

    yahoo, like it Diana..David

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:07:00 PM

    YES< this is indeed clerihew and a VERY good one at that!!!

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 8:19:00 PM

    Diana, thank you.. for the entry...p.d.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 7:47:00 PM

    Yes it is Diana, love, mom

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 5:39:00 PM

    ps..I am not an expert on this form...like u, I am just learning. I do believe yours is perfect to form though...All smiles here. I love to see young poets succeed. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 5:37:00 PM

    Isn't it JUST LIKE LUCY to pull a prank on Charlie Brown like this, Diana? I love your clerihew...I think u are a very very fast learner...It must be GENETIC!!...Like mother, like daugher..I love reading your mom's poetry.... I haven't entered one in this contest bc I don't know which one is the best..hmmm> You chose a wonderful character to write about. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 5:33:00 PM

    Good one Diana-Marie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 3:52:00 PM

    Oh my poor charlie brown. This is a great poem. I looked in several of my books on poetry and none mentioned a Clerihew. Anyway, good luck, Jancarl

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/22/2012 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I looked up Clerihew on poetrysoup "forms of poetry" and I think what I wrote is right? But it seems that everyones form is a little different. thanks for checking!