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Sun Never Rises

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Below is the poem entitled Sun Never Rises which was written by poet Marissa Long. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sun Never Rises

My days feel like nights

My nights never saw the day

For sun never rises

On clouds so gray


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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:19:00 PM

    Just make one correction in your second line: replace "seen" with "saw". This little poem looks better with proper grammar.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 1:29:00 PM

    this isnt bad just wish you would elaborate more.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Sad but well written. A thought we can all relate to.

    Long Avatar Marissa Long Date: 1/22/2012 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you