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COME DIVE THE LEAVES

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COME DIVE THE LEAVES



Come dive the leaves in varnished shades along a sway in rippling sets from green and mauve to orange blades come dive the leaves in varnished shades in swirls of iridescent braids while all soft twirls adorn wind’s nests come dive the leaves in varnished shades along a sway in rippling sets As glassy sheen weaves through the trees leaves bend in worship through hummed light while turning cheeks flushed from the breeze As glassy sheen weaves through the trees and through ribbed stalks, stars dance in flight that flicker through fine bower’s eaves as glassy sheen weaves through the trees they bend in worship to hummed light In pure delight, I watch their world on mounds of leaves, God’s tokens fall like healing psalms where hills stand tall in pure delight, I watch their world content with wisps like saintly call a lush brocade entwined and furled in pure delight, I watch their world on mounds of leaves, God’s tokens fall © triple triolet in iambic tetrameter . …. .. Each cycle brings its own spiritual energy that makes my world dance with my own sense of being...' to everything , there is a season..' Giorgio V.'s Beloved Poems Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:12:00 PM

    nice winning poem................. LUV.............. SKAT

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 11:01:00 AM

    Way to go, Nette. Great job. luv, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 6:40:00 AM

    Beautiful, Nette. Congratulations for top placement in the contest, my friend. Your eloquence appeals. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 7:44:00 PM

    congratulations my dear Nette, bright star of heaven, you won the prize, love to you always xxx

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 6:46:00 PM

    You sure nailed it, nette. Gorgeous triolets. BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 5:52:00 PM

    Beautifully written...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 2:22:00 PM

    Great rhythm, rhyme and flow to this winning work.Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 1:47:00 PM

    Nette, love your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 11:09:00 AM

    Congratulations !! Very deserved win , I love this poem , it is art in all forms .

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:05:00 AM

    Who could not love this lovely poem of nature, and the delight of diving into the rust and gold of autumn.....this is surely a beloved poem! Congrats to you Nette!

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 4:50:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, nette

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:33:00 PM

    Nette, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poems" win. xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:17:00 PM

    this is a gem of a poem, beautifully written...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:28:00 PM

    Great poem, great win. Congrats on both! G.

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Congratulations to you on your win in Debbie Guzzi 's "Change for the Meter" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Congrats Nette on your win!Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 1:28:00 AM

    nice win, thank you, Al

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 12:57:00 AM

    You sure got some awesome lines here, nette! I can't help but want to dive in those leaves as well! Beautiful series of triolet! Galing naman! Super congrats on your win and hugs :)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 5:50:00 PM

    Some of the lines are heart breakingly beautiful yet I long for the pause given by punctuation, the emphasis given by the transferance of a complete clear thought. I like the lighter font! The ending was perfection from [In pure delight down!] Congrad's on your wondrous skill! [I'd love to see your paintings?] Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 3:57:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Nette, beautiful use of words! Maureen

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 12:22:00 PM

    A beautiful read nette Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 11:45:00 AM

    Beautiful poem, Nette! Congratulations for your win in Debbie's contest! hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 11:24:00 AM

    Let's see, you've got about every figure of speech, done in rainbows of colors with light but deep images done in triple triolet (I'll have to look that up) all marching to iambic tetrameter.........and I'm often content to rhyme a couplet! Great Win

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:59:00 AM

    Your meter never falters and your triolets are beautiful. Congratulations on yur win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:36:00 AM

    Nette congrats on your win, a great Triolet..David

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Congratulations on your triolet win here Nette, 'enjoyed the many aspects you displayed here..)

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 9:25:00 AM

    Congrats Nette on your win in Debbie's contest!!! Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 8:54:00 AM

    Congratulations Nette. Nicely done

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 10:14:00 PM

    I am glad you truly like the jar write Nette bc I was thinking something when I wrote it...how would Nette describe me running with my jar in my parent's front yard..that's how I came up with a few of those lines...Thanks for inspiring me..There is a part 2 to my Soup Mail that I am trying to think of how to write...check tomorrow...smiles...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Nette. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol

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