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SERENITY RESPONSE

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SERENITY RESPONSE


Year 1983 Lord You gifted me a special child I thought then, he was a penalty Now I realized, he is an earth angel A priceless present from heaven. He has cerebral palsy, total blindness and quadriplegics I can’t replace his erratic muscles I can’t give light in his eyes I can’t change his feet. I can’t modify his physical condition. Listen to my heart Oh Lord I am your humble servant You make miracles I don’t pray for miracles now I supplicate for continuous strength! “God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change”
Written by: Dalila G Agtani 1/21/12 Entered in a contest sponsored by: nette onclaud Contest Name SERENITY RESPONSE

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  1. Date: 1/27/2012 6:28:00 PM

    Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 6:55:00 PM

    powerful sad... and uplifting at the same time thank god for people like you. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:38:00 PM

    congrats Dalila on a superb first place win for these awesome lines luv..

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Bless you for your strenght and courage Dalila. Congrats on your heartouching win.

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 10:51:00 AM

    This is very powerful, and quite moving. May I yet be as humble and serve him with as much fervor as this, thank you for an inspirational piece and congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 9:47:00 AM

    When I think that life is hard, I will have to think of you..Very expressive and emotive work..It reminds me of my father who prayed for strength each day and sometimes several times a day..Congrats on your expressive and emotive work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 5:12:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win in Nette's "Serenity Response" contest Dalila. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 11:31:00 AM

    wow, Dalila, this is a heartbreaker. I don't know if I would have it in me to tolerate such a situation as yours. I know I would do it but I don't know if my spirit could ever accept all the trials it would bring. You are amazing to be dealing with this with "serenity" and I think this poem should top the charts! (he must be a darling angel)

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 2:37:00 AM

    a beautfiful prayer... full of love and hope. good luck on the contest and thank you for your visit and comment Dalila