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Tree and leaves

        Tree: Reverse the fall
         So barren your wood branches
           Pointing at nothing

         Leaves: return to thrive
          Spring backward in time and fly
            Back from whence you came

          Tree and Leaves are one
            Complimenting the other
              Swaying to Life's song

           

           Sandra Hudson  1/20/2012
           Haiku Hodgepodge ..Trio.. Contest  
           Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 9:59:00 PM

    This is the best entry I have read yet for this contest..Very lovely personification..yes, they compliment each other well. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 4:18:00 PM

    Very enjoyable and well thought out.

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 7:42:00 AM

    Very nice haiku, Sandra...good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 1:40:00 AM

    Sandra, nicely done. A colorful image of nature. Best of luck in the contedt, Greg