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Sunshine helps melt snow,
On the tall, busy mountain
That's guiding her son.

Sensing victory,
After a long, hard journey
River joins the sea.

The river's mother-
Mountain is proud and glad that
Her son reached his goal.

By Sadaf Syed

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  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:56:00 PM
    I love how you personified things in your haiku set. I did that too. I had thought of doing mountain and river but this way you did it , never even occurred to me. CLEVER you.

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Three nicely related haiku...encapsulating the essences of river and mountain.