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Talking To Myself

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Talking To Myself

Me: You always have your eyes and ears in the tv.

Him: What?

Me: You never hear a word I say.

Him: What?

Me: What did he just say on the tv?

Him: Silence...

Me: You sleeping?

Him: No I was just resting my eyes.

Me: Are you ready for bed?

Him: No I'm not sleepy.

Him: Snore snore snore...

Me: Come on I'm sleepy lets go to bed.



For : Frank H's " The Conversation Contest "
Written By: Carol Brown
01/19/2012
1st Place Winner


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  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:32:00 AM
    An interesting form, and I like it. And the conversation brings a flood of recollections, and a smile. Wonderful

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 2:18:00 AM
    Congrats congrats indeed Carol! Love it, your simple yet profound poetry is a beautiful craft.

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 7:09:00 PM
    lol, you are funny and your descriptions bring a lot of life in this read. Very nicely done. Awesome imagery and very witty of you!

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 5:14:00 PM
    Thanks, Carol, for your kind comment. Have a great day! Maureen

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 2:35:00 PM
    This sounds exactly like me!! (Typical male) LOL!!...Milt

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Hahaha...Yeah, I can definatly relate to this one... Me: Babe your gonna fall asleep Him: No Im not Me: Yes you are your eyes are closed Him: Im just resting them Me: Fine Him: Wake me up if I do Me: Your not suppose to fall asleep Him: Snore snore snore snore Later Me: Wake up sleepy Him: mkughsoighs shut up sdgihsgh im sleeping iihsoihgsoid leave me alone Me: Sigh Lol this happens all the time with me and my boyfriend

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Well at least you gave him more lines than you, so it must be "true love" Carol.. enjoyed this, a lot..) and thank you for informing me of the featured poem...

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 5:59:00 PM
    LOL This sound soooo familiar. I know I've had a conversation just like this one before. LOL Gratz one your win. : ) love sammie

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 12:16:00 PM
    I am so happy and thankful to all who have commented and congratulated me on this poem. Have a wonderful day and I hope to soon be able to do the same for you. LOve, Carol

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 9:37:00 AM
    hahahahahahah. this is amusing. Congrats on your win. this is awesome!

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 8:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your win for the contest again, loved,bl

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on winning in the contest. Simply written and easy to read and understand.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 6:50:00 PM
    Wonderful !! Sounds so much like many I've had in the distant pass and now with Dad. Congratulations on your win !!

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 4:25:00 PM
    hahaha, that's about right!!! Good one, CARol. Big Congrats.

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Yes... men do have selective hearing. It just that they get so focused on what they are doing. A wonderful piece and congratulations on your win Carol, Greg

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 1:41:00 PM
    congrats Carol on a wonderful first place win for this great conversation my friend.. luv..

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 11:14:00 AM
    YEAH!! the good ole days LOL now only the cat holds his tongue! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 3:52:00 AM
    Thanks, Carol, for your kind congrats! Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 4:14:00 AM
    Haaaaaaaaa! find myself doing that a lot Carol. Be careful, when you start answering yourself. Have a great day, my friend. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 3:29:00 AM
    Lol I use the resting the eyes thing a lot... Nice

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