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Your notions, I was lost in the rain 
Memories of us let me in bane 
I am talking like kids, she told me 
She don’t know love, it is sane 
Always drown in sea of thoughts 
I love u so much that is main 
Don’t follow me she said to me 
Ur wasting time, it will be vain 
What are u looking at the sky 
I showed at sky the love chain 
Competitors laugh at my presence 
Love is not a play, u will bear the pain 
Once she passed from my street 
Said! What u have & what u gain

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:27:00 PM

    Welcome to PS, Ahsan... I read a touch of sadness in your poem.. Keep your chin up...every day brings a change... Keep writing. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:23:00 AM

    Welcome to poetry soup Muhammed, Rxxx

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 5:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Muhammad. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 6:30:00 AM

    welcome to the soup family,hope to see some creative work from you,check the diffeerentr terms and forms of poetry on poetrysoup,happy writing!

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 1:23:00 AM

    hmmm... you make me wonder with this..

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 6:55:00 AM

    This is so sad, greatly written, Muhammad :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 6:26:00 AM

    well done...

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 9:04:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Muhammad . I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol