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Jars

We took mason jars
and poked small holes in their lids;
then went out into
those long hot summer nights as
childhood flickered around us.

We couldn’t hold youth
any more than we could keep
caught fireflies alive,
and our once bright lights are now
dimming in the jar of life.

Written 1/17/12

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  1. Date: 2/11/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Automatically----has 6 syllables but you have put it in the 5th line.....check your latest etheree---When soup crashed.

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 7:31:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in my contest! this is a FAV!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 4:00:00 PM

    They preserve us as long as they CAN.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:18:00 AM

    Belated Congratulations Andrea x

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 2:21:00 AM

    this glows, andie... cheers to you for a grand award!!.. i wonder if we could still make those jars..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 4:21:00 PM

    I just emailed you, Andrea. I read this one on my lunch break at work but can't respond on my device..this won bc of its strong and clever analogy to life--I am sure of it! This is just another example of why you are such a great poetess..you can bring it all together on just about any topic...A bouquet of roses for this extra special win! Bravo Bravo! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 3:40:00 PM

    a sad write Andie! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Great analogy, Andrea. I truly dig this theme. Congratulations on your 1st place victory!

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 10:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 9:27:00 AM

    Wow, this is a very interesting topic on jar, Andrea. Jar of life. Thanx for your sweet comment. Congraaattsss :)

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 4:31:00 AM

    Your write invokes such sweet memories....congrats on your win : )

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 11:59:00 PM

    The march of time is described well in this winning poem. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 11:19:00 PM

    Oh yes. I thought this would be up there in the winer's circle. Congratulations once again Andrea. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 7:43:00 PM

    Congrats on the win, Chum! This one is so sad :-( But then it's all about the range isn't it? Poetry, I mean. The highs, lows, Ups, downs, births, deaths... Just to let you know. Ain't nothin' dim about you! Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 7:24:00 PM

    Congrats Andrea on your win!! I used to catch catterpillars in hopes of one turning into a butterfly - I got a lot of moths!

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 5:52:00 PM

    Congrats. Andrea on your 1st place win, back to our younger years, it's wonderful, love,vie

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 1:39:00 PM

    Congrats!! Great poem! Your light is certainly NOT dimmimg. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:35:00 PM

    I used to like to catch grasshoppers myself. Would see who could catch the most with their hands and put them in their jar. Congratulations Andrea. Well done.

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Andrea congrats on your win, the old firefly came up trumps..David

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:24:00 PM

    A.D....You rule, I knew you would..Great win for a wonderful write. Craig

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:04:00 PM

    congrats Andrea on a wonderful first place win for this excellent entry on jars luv..

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:03:00 PM

    another of your prettiest poems....i like it muchly

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 2:51:00 PM

    This is brilliant- wonderful imagery- loved it Andrea, Blessings, Bren : )

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:49:00 PM

    Wonderful entry for the jar contest. Childhood revisited. Love it. Joyce

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 3:05:00 PM

    My, this is such a clever write, my friend. I love the way you used the fireflies' light to represent life.

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 9:07:00 AM

    Boy this does bring back childhood memories of putting fire flies in a jar. Made me smile with memories from this write. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Great metaphor Andrea and it sure brings back memories. We did that every summer. Got to do it just after dark when they're still low. We, with some friends caught fireflies a few years ago to relive old memories. "Hey, let's see who can catch the most". Then someone twisted their ankle and we decided it wasn't a good idea. I caught 3 though! BTW, I know youth is still in your heart and turned to art here. Thanks, Craig

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 6:10:00 AM

    reminiscent write....fireflies and childhood....don't get no better!!

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 5:04:00 AM

    Catching fire flies.. REALLY, we were lucky to catch a grasshopper, fire flies..REALLY... I'm moving to USA..David

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 1:00:00 AM

    it's amazing how you can make something from a jar, love the last stanza. Good luck on the contest Andrea

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