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Love came and stayed

Love – you came and stayed – Just for a short time
But it was enough – for a quick glance -  a swift dance
One more music – and one more chance –
Our hearts started to beat a rhyme

The window was wide open – you left and
Can return – if you wish so – by the same door
My house is rich – my heart is poor –
A secret so easy to understand:

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  1. Date: 3/12/2012 7:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Joao. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 4:07:00 PM

    Hey, I like this poem. Very positive; highlights the possibilities of life and love. Good work.

    Camilo Avatar João Camilo Date: 1/21/2012 7:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello, Don Munro, thank you.
  1. Date: 1/19/2012 6:46:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Joao. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

    Camilo Avatar João Camilo Date: 1/21/2012 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol, I will try to interact as much as possible, even if slowly. :)
  1. Date: 1/18/2012 9:53:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poetry tonight Joao, hugs,vie

    Camilo Avatar João Camilo Date: 1/21/2012 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    than you very much Vienna, you are the first to comment on my poems, so thank you ^_^