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My Dream

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My Dream

tears fall from our eyes
universal hugs of love
peace reigns in our world
Entry: "Any Poem About Dreams" (Old or New) Sponsor: P.D. 3rd Place Winner For the "Dream Land Contest" of "Olajide Adelana" By: Carol Brown 01/18/2012 7th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 3/31/2012 4:20:00 PM

    Its so simple but so strong. wow.

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 8:49:00 AM

    A beautiful dream to have Carol, and we can hope and pray for it to come true-- I'm so sorry about your poems, maybe the time had already passed before we could retrieve it? I'm sorry I didn't realize it sooner, but that is good to know you had saved some copies of your poems...wish you all the best, Carol! hugs :)

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Thank you to all you exceptionally magnificent poets for your kind remarks. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 8:53:00 PM

    congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:29:00 PM

    Carol, beautiful Senryu. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:03:00 PM

    great win S C B..... well done here mate....

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Congrats on your win in the contest Carol.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:43:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Carol,a well deserved placement! Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Carol, congratulations on your win in PD's dream contest today!! A well deserved win indeed. Hugs and love always, Gail

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 3:57:00 AM

    Congratulations Carol, a well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 12:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Carol. This is as well as anyone can write a senryu.

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 9:18:00 PM

    congrats Carol on a great win for this amazing write so prolific .. one day maybe luv..

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 8:44:00 PM

    Congrats. Carol on your special winning poem, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/19/2012 7:47:00 PM

    lol.. Hi Carol, another wonderful win... now for me...... CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 1:14:00 AM

    carol..another wonderful win..always..pd

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 5:58:00 PM

    you took it in the other way of dream! very clever, Carol. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 6:57:00 AM

    Congratulations Carol:)

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 4:30:00 PM

    Congratulations

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 2:04:00 PM

    Congrats! On the win with this fine write. :o)

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 1:44:00 PM

    Thank you and congrats to you also. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:15:00 AM

    Beautiful (: I love it

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 1:07:00 AM

    aaaww, this is a beautiful senryu. a winner for me. good luck Carol

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 8:27:00 PM

    ha ha! here i am bothering you one more time.. i want this dream land to.... in a world of peace,, i won't have no more tears.... thank you for sharing your wonderful poems... ta ta ta,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 2:25:00 PM

    universal love is love, God is love. It works. lovely well written friend. so glad I can be myself here again :)

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 9:12:00 AM

    Honey write. It's a great philosophy rests in finest Universal border, Needs devotion I do feel, bl

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 8:52:00 AM

    This is a great dream Carol! Peace would be really great, a great dream! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Short by speaks a volume Carol, lovely poetry this morning, sending you my blessings, vie

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Lovely Carol.Good luck in the contest.I am in dreamland already :) - oxox love Anne-Lise