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The sinners gait

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The sinners gait

Yes,
the whip did crack
‘pon mine back

Though the feel was
the smack

And yes double,
for this soul did revel 
in her;
promiscuous glut 







The strength is in the title my 
friends *smiles* 

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  1. Date: 1/23/2012 8:50:00 AM

    seems we pay dearly for sins of the flesh luv.. but the spirit is the main squeeze for us .. who luv so deeply..

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Could we count the pleasure for the stripes to measure? How deep the feeling when the soul is reeling from a new found treasure! Could hardly wait to read James, you never fail to amaze!

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Enjoyed this fine write James. Thanks for your comments . love phyl

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 8:12:00 AM

    Gait play on words?...Like a horse at the starting gate being ridden hard to win the race?...Thanks for stopping by..Yes, that mistletoe is poisonous as well as inviting..Sara

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 6:24:00 PM

    Jimmy, thank you for your comments! you always center my intentions! strine alike! jimbo

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 5:59:00 PM

    aha, "gait" yes, it's a good title indeed, james!! thanks for your comment today. LUv, Andrea