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Dropped in to visit...impulsive action

For Brian Strand contest 
Any Form/Any Theme
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  1. Date: 1/21/2012 11:54:00 AM

    wow..I love it! XO

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 1:06:00 AM

    congrats carol! always love your monoku

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 4:47:00 AM


  1. Date: 1/18/2012 2:09:00 PM

    Congratulations Carol. Love, Sarah

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 8:02:00 PM

    Congratulations, Carol. I seem to remember you did one like this before!

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 5:15:00 PM

    Carol Brown ..u r invited to join in the Clerihew War ...write a Clerihew about anyone famous and send it back to Charles Hinshaw. Then ask someone else to write one...keep the fun alive!

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 4:46:00 PM

    Brian liked this, and so do I. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 4:33:00 PM

    Congrats on your placing in Brian's contest..Enjoyed your short line to can be interperted so many ways...Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your are feeling better...Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 3:23:00 PM

    great piece of poetry, interaction, well done Carol...

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 9:49:00 AM

    congrats Carol on HM with this exciting entry.. hope all is well ..and u are felling better luv..

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 8:11:00 AM

    This is wonderful Carol, every word fits together so well then the title explains all. harry

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 6:24:00 AM

    Congrats are in order, Carol...yeah! Go OHIO!! ha ha...Coffee builds on me...the more I drink, the more poetry I read! haha. Gotta tell ya...this monoku , if it were true..would give me quite the panic! I have to vacuum and dust and shower and put on something nice and burn some intense cookie smelling candles..please call b4 you stop over here. ha hah. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 3:30:00 AM

    Love it! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 3:04:00 AM

    Congratulations Carol x

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 9:07:00 PM

    Congratulations Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 6:50:00 PM

    Expectedly excellent, luv, jag

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 4:33:00 PM

    Those kinds of visits can be good or bad depending on who is paying the visit! In your case, would be wonderful. Congrats on your win, CArol.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 3:13:00 PM

    scary too I bet! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 2:56:00 PM

    Wishing you God's best in everything you do! Thanks for the comments and your wonderful poems! God bless!!! JP

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Hope you got a cup of congrats on a great one. Bg

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 2:24:00 PM

    Carol great monoku, good luck for the contest, many thanks for all of your very kind comments..David

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 2:15:00 PM

    LOL, I'm sure you're always a welcome guest, Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:52:00 AM

    Great write Carol my friend... Congrats..... luv Michael

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 10:57:00 AM

    I am so glad you did, love and light Carol, and a hug for the day, vie

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Thank you for your best wishes. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 10:24:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, bl

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 10:02:00 AM

    Very deepest one, starts......end composed with fantastic rhythm. Enjoyed much, bl

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 9:21:00 AM

    so finely written with a touch of a curved ball in the end, " impulsive action.." winning stuff, carol! :) huggs!