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Love and Live

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Love and Live

                       I went for a walk on life`s mysterious path
                                     and that`s where I found it

                  Something alive,something trembling with pure joy
                      bounces..jumps..like a transparent gel in my hands

                    I keep you there for a while..so fragile yet so eager
                     a desire to love and let live,comfort comes from a good heart

          It is your soul I`ve found,a treasure beyond any perception I have ever known
                  stir my emotions,to know that you are a part of my life now

                            To know that you are there..is not enough
                             need all of you,my precious little twinsoul


 A.Ertsland

 13th January 2012

 Dedication To Anne Lise Andresen

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  1. Date: 5/6/2012 2:59:00 PM
    A beautiful dedication to your wife Arild, so cool to scratch around for the gems I haven't read yet ;) love & hugs CTC

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 9:27:00 AM
    How beautiful.....such a kind dedication, and with such soft words. Nicely done. So glad I have found your poems :) I'm sorry I have missed you work before. !!

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:15:00 AM
    Very nice. I can appreciate a poet who can write in the short styles. Well done.

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 5:24:00 AM
    I wonder where can i find a twinsoul for mine.. creative write, Arild. :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 11:56:00 PM
    BRILLIANT :D Always, laura

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 4:17:00 PM
    ARild, I checked both poems and didn't see what you had mentioned in the soupmail. Where is it? Did you maybe block them? Then their stuff would go away, I believe.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Twin soul? Wow impresive.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:37:00 PM
    Awwww. How very sweet. Arild..I love the protoplasm line in the 2nd stanza..very cool! Enjoyed this sincere friendly write. Gwendolen..ps..I spelled your name with my eyes closed! Viola!...I can be taught!

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Arild, a sweet dedication to Anne Lise. I haven't really "met" you yet. I suppose it is redundant and quite belated, but I offer you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Hey, better late than never, right haha!

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    Date: 1/14/2012 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your welcome salute,Chris! Appreciated lots:) And thanks for your great comment,..yeah,she`s one of a milion!
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 12:56:00 PM
    Wow... this is really lovely Arild... a pleasure to read....thanks ....smiles.....chiquita

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 8:08:00 AM
    A beautiful poem so well worded and a nice dedication.Enjoyed the read Arild.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:39:00 AM
    Very romantic indeed..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I am up and about with a box of kleenex..The pits isn't it..That is a cold..Sara

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:14:00 AM
    My dear Arild........WOW.... is this for me????? Thank you,thank you - my twinsoul!!! BEAUTIFUL !!!! - OXOX love Anne-Lise

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    Date: 1/15/2012 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow who could blame em?
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    Date: 1/14/2012 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    awww..this is soo cute...Im glad you liked it,you mean more than words could ever say:) Love,Arild
  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:48:00 AM
    twinsoul! first time i read this word Arild, gotta tell my twin sister about this. A wonderful dedication poem indeed!

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:46:00 PM
    So special Arild; she looks like such a sweet person. I'm wondering if you both are from Norway, anyway I think your words should make her very happy.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:17:00 PM
    This is very beautiful dedication to Anne Lise, Arild!! Love is indeed, all! Definitely one for my "Favs. List". Have a beautiful weekend, you guys!! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 6:19:00 PM
    This is so sweet, Arild!! I hope she finds it fast. Glad to see you have a connection with this twinsoul of yours. She is deserving of this poem. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Arild, I love this! a lot of emotion.