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A New for What was Taken

(25/12/2011)

I don’t fancy what God did to me
I had my loss just yesterday
Last memory about her was when 
she smiled at me
Couldn’t believe she had gone away

Her life was to bargain
With this pure soul I have in my 
arms
Until I see her again
I promise I’ll protect him from 
harms

One life was taken, after one given 
for the forsaken
Life as it is, we have to surrender 
of what it has given

* a poem about a loss of a woman 
die laboring.

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  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:33:00 PM

    who was this that you lost, Dinda? You have written in a way that shows a mature acceptance of God's plan.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 8:08:00 AM

    Death is only a momentary experience till we rise at the resurrection. Till then, let the memories you have give comfort dear one. Sometimes our loss is another's gain.

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 8:15:00 AM

    Sorry for your lost Dinda... some day (maybe) we meet again....my last poem is about my lost.oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 5:17:00 AM

    life have many curves can be sweet can be bitter .... nicely written Dinda

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:42:00 AM

    if this is from RL, I am sorry for your lost Dinda. you conveyed deeply your emotions with a surprising distant feeling. emotional write wonderfully done

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 7:32:00 PM

    Yes life has amazing pain and amazing joys- loved your poem, may joy soften your pain, love, Brenda : )

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 11:26:00 AM

    A poem about some kind of separation I think....a touching write.Thanks for your so many sweet comments at my pages.

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:22:00 AM

    When life is over we go to heaven. That is if we did what God wanted us to do.