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If She Only Knew

If she only knew the way i feel How weak my armor is with all its steel I try to shield myself from her charm But it moves automatically, my arm Reaching out for her everyday How I want to spend with her my day I love her but she's still blind If she could only read my mind! However, once again it is all in my head All of it, love and its shades of red But how long will it ever take For her to see how much my heart ache Emotions are taking control While misery is taking its toll Waiting as sorrow's wind blew Living with the "if she only knew"
Poet: Ali Akl Contest: The Secondhand Emotion

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  1. Date: 1/25/2012 1:19:00 PM

    sometimes love is blind, you captured that in your poetry. wonderful write. I feel the ache in your words. thank you for sharing!

    Akl Avatar Ali Akl Date: 6/25/2012 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks :)
  1. Date: 1/16/2012 7:39:00 AM

    Captivating and made me smile all the way :)

    Akl Avatar Ali Akl Date: 6/25/2012 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol I'm glad it did :), I'm guessing you know of the woes of the friendzone?