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Paranoid

Blue eyes turn green,
Seeing mean tricks;
Unseen, chances.

Jack Horne for Dana Lynn's Second Hand Emotion contest

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  1. Date: 1/17/2012 6:12:00 AM

    Congratulations Jack on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 9:22:00 PM

    Congrats, Jack. Great write. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 7:09:00 PM

    Congratulations on you HM ,Jack.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 3:49:00 PM

    sounds like jealousy! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this one..Not sure exactly what you wanted one to get from this one..Reads like a good entry..Good luck in contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind reviews of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 2:52:00 AM

    yes, this is simply interesting. i wonder what you're thinking when you wrote it? good luck on the contest jack

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 6:28:00 PM

    There you go again, using simplicity in such a GREAT way for the contests!! Good luck, Jack. You are one clever guy. (I got a kick out of BL's comment. I think those not English might not get the symbolism of green)

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Fascinating write Jack! I would have never thought of linking these together toward "...unseen, chances..." great write! Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Interesting one, where blue eyes turn green. Thanks, bl