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Pursuit

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Pursuit

her feminine wiles
catch his gaze across the room
his lashes curtain

is it possible?
his coyness intrigues her more?
she longs to know him

she inhales, exhales
she gives herself a pep talk
who is this creature?

her approach is slow 
a smile dances on her lips
is it in his kiss?

written by Diana-Marie Bomardieri
January 09, 2012

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  1. Date: 4/9/2012 5:19:00 PM
    This is an amazing poem! I absolutely loved it! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 12:02:00 AM
    Diana-Marie, here's your first lesson on poetry. You have a fine ensemble of verses presented. However, these entries should be classified as senryu poems. A senryu poem describes human qualities where haiku poems describe things in nature. Nevertheless, these are impressive writes.

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri
    Date: 1/11/2012 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Robert, nice to meet you:) Thank you so much for correcting me:$ I don't really know much about poetry so any & all help/suggestions are welcomed!
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 11:28:00 PM
    Diana, wow~... a very wonderful poem.. Thank you for sharing your awesome poem. Take care and have yourself a good night ;-) always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 10:31:00 PM
    ooh la la. This reminds me of when I first met my hubbie!! I watching him during a dance as I moved in for the kill!! (and yes, I too long for a saner yesterday PRE- IPHONES!!) Welcome to Soup!!

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 1:54:00 PM
    Romantic and most enjoyable read again,Diane.hmmm..who is this creature?:) Did you know that your mom was the first one to ever comment me here at the Soup,(except Carols`welcome of course:) I was so very proud,and I still remember that moment as it should be yesterday..Take Care Diane

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 12:24:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Diana-Marie. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 11:20:00 AM
    An enchanting poem, Diana. Very romantic.I love it. -Mohammad