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Drama Twins, Unmasked - Collaboration with Andrea Dietrich

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Drama Twins, Unmasked - Collaboration with Andrea Dietrich

I'll bring a tear to every eye,
and I can make a grown man cry.
To grip you is my specialty,
for once you are caught up in me,
strong feelings will intensify.

 
I'll make you ponder things like why
a nice guy has to cheat or lie.
I mirror sad humanity.
I'll bring a tear.

 
It's by man's flaws and sometimes by
the hand of fate that he must die.
To see man face mortality,
you'll empathize; I'm tragedy!
Have tissues ready.  Dry your eye.
I'll bring a tear.

____

I’m full of fun for everyone.
Watch me now and you’ll come undone.
Test me with a humor trial - 
If you frown, you’re in denial! 
I’m a funny son-of-a-gun!

I’m full of silly, zany puns.
I’ll make you forget life’s problems.
With my antics I’ll beguile;
I’m full of fun!

For I’m Drama’s beloved son.
I’m Comedy, second to none.
Full of tricks to make you smile;
Entertaining for a while.
Don’t go yet. My gags aren’t done;
I’m full of fun!


A Double Rondeau
Part one/Andrea Dietrich
Part two/ Susan Burch
Received 4th place in  "Opposites" Collaboration Contest

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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:41:00 AM

    You both are talented and fantastic poets. Glad to read your collaboration! :) wonderfully penned!!!

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 3:13:00 PM

    Susan congratulations to you and Andrea on your win in Tracie's contest, you guys make a great team, keep up the great work! On behalf of Carolyn and myself we would like to thank you for your kind comments on our co-write. Alexa

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 2:09:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:07:00 AM

    Excellent Rondeau. Congratulations on your win in Tracie's contest. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win,Susan!

  1. Date: 1/14/2012 12:43:00 AM

    Loved much and congrats on your win, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 1:49:00 PM

    I found your concept for the collab to be so cool! Awesome for you and Andrea to have thought of drama and comedy! I really enjoyed reading this double rondeau and you sure showed off the contrast between the two so well here, Susan and Andrea! Way to go for you and super congrats!! :D

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 12:04:00 PM

    the twins!.. you both revved it up with such splendid imagery and concept.. sweeet congrats to you, andie and susan! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Susan, you and Andrea work very well together - the two of you pulled off an amazing collaboration here! Congratulations on your win in Tracie's contest!

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 10:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your joint win x

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:06:00 AM

    CONGRATS SUSAN ON 4TH PLACE WITH ANDREA ..WONDERFUL ENTRY.. AMAZING COLLAB.. SUPER WIN..

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:03:00 AM

    Congrats. Susan on your special win, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 1/13/2012 8:40:00 AM

    Susan and Andrea, congrats on your win, I remember this one very well..David

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:41:00 PM

    the form ruined a masterpiece. do it over. T. S.

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:34:00 PM

    Not only is this great but fun to read...Still boggles my mind how opposites attract. Love the story. Best wishes for the Winners' List! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 10:23:00 AM

    a super awesome collab stating winner all the way ... good luck luv .. am working on mine today ..

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 9:34:00 PM

    Yayyy, you got yours up. WAs I supposed to put the collaboration stuff in the title. I better go make sure about that!! thanks so much for coming up with your fantastic "fun" counter to my tragedy part. You are a doll, Susan.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 2:42:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Every life needs a little fun..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 1/10/2012 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Susan, Yes my mother always said the black-eyed peas were the pennies and the collards or turnips were the green backs or ones, fives, tens , and twenties..One was suppose to eat much so that one would have a large income this new year..Sara
  1. Date: 1/10/2012 1:24:00 PM

    Wow, you two sure did write a fantastic poem! I really enjoyed this write immensely, it's a special poem! Comedy and Tragedy, Shakespeare's finest forms of plays! And Andrea's and Susan's finest subjects for poetry! You each did a fine job for your respective parts! Awesome Work you two!!

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 12:55:00 PM

    The best to you both Andrea & Susan in the contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 8:20:00 AM

    Susan, you both did extremely well here, drama twins is correct using the theatre masks, love it, good luck.. David

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 7:50:00 AM

    this is a double treat, susan and andie... i like the way you both made this flow with keen poetic sense.. susan, my piece for nikko was horrific, lol.. imagine the restrictions ( 1 week in the making), but fun.. i hugg you!..best winning whoots!

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 7:09:00 AM

    thank you sooo much,,for reading gwen and my collab,,and commenting,,,so sweet,,this is such a great collab,,,i enjoyed this very much,,and so nice to have met you......

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 6:43:00 AM

    This is one form I do like to Fox with. Susan, ya' couldn't have picked a sharper pardner than my good buddy Andrea! Excellent stuff!

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 6:39:00 AM

    wow... and good morning SUSAN..;-) yeah.... to the poewer we poses,,, when we know how to pull of a play in our own minds... the words that hit like thunder.... i love the smiles you hand out here... cheers to you and Andrea,,,always...p.d.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Wow..such a change it atmosphere between the two parts. Well done..Suspense held me in the first part and smiles came through on the second. Enjoyed !!!