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The Force

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The Force

Adding
peculiar
subtracting
never

laws 
of something
(besides physics)

has to
wants to
needs to
improve

velocity 
is present
and that very force
pushes 
the dead weight
forward
until
it can't sit still anymore

because
it has to

it's got to move
or else
it dies

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  1. Date: 1/12/2012 5:56:00 PM
    ahhhhh released! creation can not occur without destruction ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 11:49:00 PM
    Just like the Doobie Brothers sing "It Keeps You Running". One must constantly move and strive for the better. You have described it all well here.

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 7:41:00 AM
    I love this JS. It is like random thoughts coming at me. Very creative and poetic. I want to thank you for all your amazing comments and support of my poetry. It means so much to me.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 5:10:00 PM
    I really like that: it HAS to move or it dies. Awesome thought, my friend. well, I hope to see more of you, but as usual I have to rush. Luv ya, andrea

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 1:00:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your Outstanding poetry this afternoon JS. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Wonderful, simply wonderful! I just love the last three powerful lines! I really enjoyed this write Joey! To be pushed to the point when we must move is really the reason for poetry! I write because I have the urge, the desire, the need to write something poetic...it's the way to this Force, to write!! Always moving desire to write, I love the creativity that does come from this Force! Great write Joey! Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 7:16:00 AM
    Kind of like the ocean when it flows and recedes, love the ocean behind you, no greater force is there then the waters God created and gave, always in love and in light, Vie

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 4:48:00 AM
    Enjoy life....a happy heart live longer. :)oxox hugs Anne-Lise