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Rapped Heart

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Rapped Heart

You ripped my heart out
You used it as a cushion without consideration

You ripped my heart out
You left me in despair without a care

You ripped my heart out
You used it to keep yourself occupied and took me for a joyride

You ripped my heart out
You left be wondering about this ambivalent relationship, something I could never grip

You ripped my heart out
You used my hopes from the get-go, made it seem like such a natural flow

You ripped my heart out
You left me with anger, doubt, sadness, hurt something I can't construe as you left me the way that I had found you

You might as well of ripped my heart out - you wore it out

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup. Keep writting. Sooo much anger in this one... Try one of our member contests. I think you'll like them.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Sabrina it a lovely poem,touching. Welcome in P.Soup Sabrina!!! :)oxox love from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 5:29:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sabrina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 11:58:00 AM

    This is so well written, I can totally feel the emotion behind it. This is my favourite part: "You left me with anger, doubt, sadness, hurt something I can't construe as you left me the way that I had found you."