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Fairground Fur

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Fairground Fur

Fi,fy,foe,fum. I smell the blood. Sweet nectar of fools. Stamp them down. Stamp it all out. Back and forth like the swing of a fairground hammer.

Adjust the ride. Inject the senses. Bathed in a misty surround of vibrant blue striped with lashings of orange.

Moving to the fruit machine looking like an ice cream. Staring fish eyed at the captivating peaches on display at the counter of commerce.

Trouble follows me says the curly fig bush swaying in the breeze. A magnitude of realms in which it dwells. Such luxury to come. Easily afforded by the advance received to correlate and inject the fusion. Dashing amber lights and stripes of brown liquid. The mask lives on. In kind. A mono-rail. An inner world of torrents gush and volcanic eruptions.
The girl and her pal enter the fair. A stare from jaded eyes seems familiar yet goes unnoticed as the magic of rides sweeps over and laughter begins.

Later the long square mirror reflects the room of red and white stripes and posters to gaze upon. The small box on the window sill containing natural possessions. A stone. A rock. A leaf. To reach out to the directions and elements as per book instruction.

Meanwhile the ice cream cone and fig set loose energy to many. Vibrations of many hue and form. Yet the pink orb slipped by unnoticed.

UNUSUAL.UNCHARACTERISTIC.UNCHALLENGED.UNIQUE.

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  1. Date: 1/12/2012 8:33:00 AM

    A fun read. Thanks for sharing :-)

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 1:51:00 AM

    yes welcome here Tami- I am new here also- I shall look forward to reading more of your work- you have a vivid imagination, blessings, Brenda : )

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 5:15:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tami. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

    Fidler Avatar Tami Fidler Date: 1/9/2012 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks )