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Chocolate Goddess

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Chocolate Goddess

Chocolate goddess of my dreams I await the soft kiss of bliss that is you if ever you should come to meet me beyond my imagination's musing how I would melt into loving chocolate that swirls around you like soft summer slowly caressing you in waves more tender than butterfly's feet kissing the tender lining of your heart as you rattle my tranquility in quivers causing it to settle more deeply allowing my eyes to touch my soul each time I have the pleasure of seeing you standing next to me where you've never been except only in my exquisite dreams. The grace of your beauty illuminates the path that I could not well see before your heart appeared standing motionless in the doorway of time that stood still in honor of your being and began again only so mortals could see you showering loving inspiration into their world where you bless them as you walk upon the ground they worship never realizing their own hearts are just the same as yours if only they could realize we are all one and you are but a slice of heaven on earth as are they too be

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 11:32:00 AM
    Love the poem..love its shape.. Wow..what vivid poetry..in word and form. Enjoyed !!

    Parks Avatar Patrick Parks
    Date: 1/11/2012 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debra... this is one of my favorites... here is the image that together with my real life "chocolate goddess" inspired those words: http://bit.ly/zTVlmp
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:12:00 PM
    description that highly honors one's sweetheart in addition to that wonderful chocolate! Your bottom stanza's shape almost resembles an ice cream cone. WE can say a chocolate one! Kash told me to check you out. He is a great guy and loves romantic poetry!! You did a great romantic poem. Andrea

    Parks Avatar Patrick Parks
    Date: 1/11/2012 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 1/8/2012 6:11:00 PM
    Now this is very impressive writing. It is rather ironic that you would post this when I posted a poem about the late German singer Trude Herr. She had a hit song years ago titled "I Don't Want Chocolate". This write almost appears as a silhouette of an absinthe spoon.

    Parks Avatar Patrick Parks
    Date: 1/11/2012 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert
  1. Date: 1/8/2012 5:55:00 PM
    enjoyed your poems very much.You are added to my Fav poets!!

    Parks Avatar Patrick Parks
    Date: 1/8/2012 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash! I haven't posted in here in a long time. I've just be blogging my poems at http://pparks.com but decided to make a few of them available more publicly. I'm dashing out the door right now, but will try to come back and have a peek at your poems soon when I have a little more time. thanks again for your kind words.