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Cursed

Sadly
Manipulated angry
feelings curse me
Chaining me, stalking me
Darkness has currpted my soul
Save me, enchant me
Untaint these words
Fool me
Saviour.

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  1. Date: 5/24/2012 1:22:00 PM

    :) loved this poem spewing with depression...I'm trying not to cry! Great job! -DWB :)

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/24/2012 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad it made you feel something, even if is a bit negative :) Stacey
  1. Date: 5/16/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Great language! This one really packs a punch... Well done, Stacey!! Best wishes, Keith

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 5/17/2012 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, best wishes to you also.
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:45:00 AM

    A nicely cryptic piece, love the use of all those evocative words. Enjoyed.

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 4/3/2012 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 5:27:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Stacey. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

    Brackley Avatar Stacey Brackley Date: 4/3/2012 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.