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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 1/7/2012 7:54:00 PM
    The mark of a good writer is making fiction seem like reality. You have accomplished that here with this entry.

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 6:54:00 PM
    Regardless if this fictional or a true story...the spirit of your strong faith, and love comes shining through each line. Lovely!

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 6:24:00 PM
    as Vienna say kick out the very doubt, till it does cease to be, when faith is strong , keep right along, till doubt does set you free... thanks Gail..

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 4:33:00 PM
    Yes they do Gail, one must believe in order to see, unfortunately we are creatures of doubt, thank you for sharing dear heart, vie

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 4:30:00 PM
    Well, Gail, you do a terrific job in empathizing with the narrator and having this "made up poem" come across as a very personal and real experience. Being able to aptly relay such a heartfelt story of a fictional character, I think, is the mark of a truly talented writer. You successfully pulled that off with, "The Miracle of Life". Good job.