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The Pleasure of the Written Lover

With a mind set for love and pleasure,
He glides his pen across the paper.
With each caress he gives his soul,
Written down for all to behold.
 
Kissing memories in every line
And leaving feelings so sublime,
We hang on to each word created.
Never shall we become sedated.
 
Ah, the fingers that trail along
The heart’s passion hungry song.
Stroking the fire to burn stronger
For whatever your lust can conjure.
 
Mouth spoken with such sensuality
It embraces the minds creativity.
Making a world all its own
And every craving is known.
 
In the being, he sees the worth,
Beauty and every silent urge.
His written word makes desires soar
And leaves us begging for more

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  1. Date: 1/11/2012 10:30:00 PM

    I can't even describe how in love with this poem I am. Beautifully written, and you definately deserve the feature. Congrats -Destiny Echo

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 12:32:00 PM

    Beautifully descriptive and a wholesome piece of love sentiments perfectly described and breathtaking! Congratulations on your features poem this week. Captivating and heartfelt!

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Congratulations Toshia, lovely poem. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 2:16:00 AM

    simply amazing....loved it

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 8:03:00 PM

    A lovely poem ..... enjoyed reading

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:45:00 PM

    toshia,,you are one amazing,,writer,,,i remember reading your poems,,on the other sight,,,,you got some serious talent...congrats,,,,,,you deserve this featured poem....

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 11:19:00 AM

    Eloquently said.

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Toshia. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 7:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on the week`s win Toshia!:) oxox love from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 12:25:00 PM

    this is your best,,,you are a master in tha craft,,,i enjoyed this so much,,,,i am so glad you are here.....