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  1. Date: 1/10/2012 11:54:00 PM
    Amber, this is more of a senryu than a haiku. Haiku poems describe things in nature. Both of them follow a 5/7/5 syllable poem.

    Chafer Avatar Amber Chafer
    Date: 1/11/2012 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for letting me know! :)