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A LOVE STORY

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A LOVE STORY


She is in her 59th summers, while he is in his 60th winters The way they size up themselves They are what “on” toward redeeming And regaining each their respective separate lives before To one lofty and solid momentum in their lives If they are today an aged wine, they are the savor They delve and sip on it to quench their dried lips Their dried throats to their hearts’ contents For they are still endowed in spirit, mind and heart! Once more their paths crossed Forty two years ago of gnawing, searching And to a halt, they met again Destiny, they believe in the making then Finally they found themselves fulfilling Lost paradise in a kubo (hut) at the back of a hill Near a sand dune mountain near the China sea in the North. A love never and never in their far fetched imagination They cohabited and concocted this love story Together they trek a new life with hope A love never in their lives as separated and divorcees Ignited a new love and a new, good and compatible relationship That they alone knew. Witnessing the romance are love birds in one nest And bamboos swaying with joy acquiesced their longings Together they drown themselves And into high potion of endearment They have not indulged into drugs like addicts They were likened but this time They are really HIGH..into LOVE. Till the reawakening break of a new dawn And beyond every pages of calendar Their love will stay forever.
Dalila Agtani 1/5/2012 Entered in a contest Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi Contest Name Tell Me a Story

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  1. Date: 1/12/2012 7:45:00 PM
    knew it. super cheers to you for the fine win, dalila!..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 9:28:00 PM
    what an awesome love story. One that is for the likes of me as I get closer to 60 every day. YIKES. congratulations. I enjoyed this.

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 6:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on you win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Dalila. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/9/2012 12:49:00 AM
    rooting for this, dalila.. congrats on your solid win... ang ganda! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 8:26:00 PM
    CONGRATS DALILA ON A WONDERFUL WIN FOR THIS MOVING STORY SO EMOTIONAL..LUV.. THANKXX FOR WARM WORDS OF COMFORT TOO..

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 10:46:00 AM
    A LOVING STORY DALILA.. GOOD LUCK ...A BIG WINNER SURELY... MISSED U MUCH BUT AM RETURNING SLOWLY WHILE RECUPERATING IN ITALY WITH HUBBY...IT HAS BEEN AN ORDEAL BUT WITH GREAT FRIENDS LIKE U LUV..BECOMES EASIER...HOPE TO BE ON MORE AS DOCTOR PERMITS ME TO USE MY HAND ..HNY ..

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 9:40:00 AM
    You are so right, Dalila and reading this has definitely got me smiling! ^_^! Wow is this your love story? I think it is and it is beautiful! I really enjoyed how your paths crossed again after all those years-- amazing. I love stories like these and you put in your beloved kubo...now I understand more why it is so significant to you...Wish you more love! Thank you as well for passing by my poem :D hugs to you! :D & yes, mas malamig nga ngayon kesa nung Pasko :)