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It was winter

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It was winter

    It never rained ,they were my tears;
                 the sunken secrets
    behind my dazzling deep eyes !
              It was winter and we were lovers
    its winter again and my love is frozen
              my heart is hoarse and insane,
     A ruined love  song rings through my ears.
            accursed emotions breaking into tears
      my lips are bleeding with your kisses
             a venomous love releases
                   a sad winter's tale :(




Red @ 2012 3.30 am singapore...

     
       

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  1. Date: 1/8/2012 3:36:00 AM
    sure is sad Red, but a wonderful read. are you in singapore? i love it there, been many times when living in Perth western australia. harry

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 11:18:00 PM
    EXCELLENT AND CREATIVE LINES SO IMPRESSIVE RED FIERY.. THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENTS ON MY POETRY.. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE LINES FROM U LUV..

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 8:45:00 PM
    very beautiful,,ms fiery,,its a tear,,heart and soul poem...

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 1:15:00 PM
    Sad as it is..this is beautiful written Red.I can feel your heart and soul all the way up here.."emotions breaking into tears", hits me right on my dear friend.Hugs coming your way.And thanks for your nice comment.Love,Arild

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 8:13:00 PM
    oooww, pain just surging out from this beautiful written poetry Red... keeping you in my thoughts

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 3:40:00 PM
    you know what they say about love "it sux"

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 1:50:00 PM
    Lovely,sad and beautiful written Red.(frozen love.....sad)OXOX hugs Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 12:28:00 PM
    I feel the emotion in this, very well written. I love your lines: my lips are bleeding with your kisses a venomous love releases a sad winter's tale :(