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Lost Within the Thoughts

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Lost Within the Thoughts



Lost within the thoughts of future sorrow
where shadows hold to hands in grief and loss
wishing freedom for a new tomorrow.

The silent walls and bridges yet to cross
alone in time with sanity’s loose grip
where shadows hold to hands in grief and loss.

With life’s sweet nectar soured, deathly sip…
diseases fester, gaining in control
alone in time of sanity’s loose grip.

Beyond endurance, voices collect toll
of crimson promises…a slash away.
Diseases fester, gaining in control.

Repeated chorus as the blade hold sway
abandoning the reasons, cause of past…
The crimson promises just slashed away.

Along the path of misery, life’s last.
It’s lost with thoughts of pain’s future sorrow,
abandoning life’s reasons…it’s the past.
Wishes now are freedom’s new tomorrow.


Janet L Vick

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  1. Date: 1/17/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Janet. It is always a pleasure to read your amazing poetry. Love, Carol

    Vick Avatar Janet Vick
    Date: 1/19/2012 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol, especially for your comments. Take care. Janet
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 1:10:00 AM
    you and me are carved from the same diamond, Jane people get depressed by reading most of my work although i find only truth and solace in a familiar feeling, thank you, i love your work.

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 7:07:00 PM
    enjoyed has a great flow!!

    Vick Avatar Janet Vick
    Date: 1/11/2012 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Doris, Greatly appreciate you reading and commenting. Take care. Janet
  1. Date: 1/6/2012 6:17:00 AM
    beautiful poem, your style is different from mine and i truly appreciate it, how long have you been writting?

    Vick Avatar Janet Vick
    Date: 1/6/2012 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I have written poetry since I was a kid, many years ago. I have been writing in various forms over the last 5 years. Before that, it was strictly free verse. Take care, Janet