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WE MET

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WE MET

I met you just today, At an unexpected time, And we talked. I shared with you today, Sweet memories of joy, And we laughed. I walked with you today, On crowded streets, And we rested. I wined with you today, Dark eyes across the table, And we touched. I left you just today, ‘Twas the sweetest farewell, And we parted. I remembered you today, Soft eyes in the sunset, And I cried.

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  1. Date: 1/7/2014 4:32:00 PM
    I like the form idea. Congrats. daver

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 6:19:00 AM
    Nice use of strategic repetition and effective ending.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 9:12:00 PM
    William, .... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:31:00 PM
    Full of emotion and brilliantly written. Very touching.

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 3:13:00 PM
    Awe, you have such a tender heart. Enjoyed your poem. Hugs, Catie :)

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker
    Date: 2/1/2012 11:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Catie, I love your comment and your poetry.crossfox