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My Favourite Dish

With skin as smooth as porcelain Responsive to my touch I bask in your heady scent My desire for you is such That I cannot resist you My senses you bemuse Even when you're in a crowd It's still you that I choose I long to see you naked When our foreplay has begun And savor your sweet body Banana anyone??

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  1. Date: 1/12/2012 11:31:00 PM

    Whoa, this is a sultry write. Great words and rhyming in this one Bob.

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 1/19/2012 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Bob
  1. Date: 1/11/2012 11:19:00 PM

    lol, banana anyone? This is so funny, the ending phrase that is. A very sensual poem delivered with style..you caught me off guard with the banana?

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 1/19/2012 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thought I would have some fun with this one. Thanks for your comments Sue
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 12:25:00 PM

    LMAO i love bananas because bananas have no bones :)

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 1/9/2012 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Absolutely John:)
  1. Date: 1/3/2012 9:21:00 PM

    Bob, simply perfect, an amazing write, will do very well in the contest, best of luck, Greg

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 1/9/2012 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Greg. Hope so.
  1. Date: 1/3/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Bob this is so great I think I may reconsider entering! I always go for #1 and I know David will love this! We'll see I guess-Happy New year btw!

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 1/3/2012 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Natalie. Look forward to seeing yours also. Good luck
  1. Date: 1/3/2012 12:07:00 PM

    You had me going there for a minute. Was not expecting the punch line. HA!HA!HA! This is brilliant. Best wishes in the contest, Bob. Love, Kim

    Quigley Avatar Bob Quigley Date: 1/3/2012 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gotta watch out the punch line Kim. You never know:)