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A letter to God

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A letter to God

I'm tired of writing poetry, but with this last piece of hope i try to summarize everything because ill be gone any day . If everyone is learning who am i to feel different? It cant be the ego for even he has folded his hand. Its not even the memories. Its the look i give and whats felt between us while things happen to others. I guess that's life. Whats a prison sentence when i live like this? One king will one day read this and feel my love and state of mind. We have a game to play, and one which will smile yet a smile isnt what we are after. It is the greatest high. It is my ego after-all. To have known i was a man, a weak man that couldn't deal with reality so he changed the world for the better, the perfect better.

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:28:00 PM
    cooll.... poem..pd

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 5:07:00 AM
    I read something to do day that moved me- it was " One man may see bars but, the other sees stars," Life-is all a point of view and usually ours- I think you have conveyed this well- just my point of view.All the very best, Brenda : )

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    Date: 1/3/2012 11:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    im happy u picked up on what i was trying to do
  1. Date: 1/3/2012 1:38:00 AM
    this is my first poem after i deleted 60 of my previous poems i had on this site.