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  1. Date: 1/23/2015 10:08:00 PM
    What a inspirational verse you've made! I love all of it, though these lines stood out to me..."Success is failure turned inside out, only the silver tint from the clouds of doubt." - clever rhyming throughout. Thanks for sharing and inspiring me today. : ) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/25/2014 10:03:00 PM
    This is how I felt, and somehow, I stuck to the fight.. This poem, still means much to me. Glad I stopped by to visit my favorite poems today... I love this, David, Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 12/25/2014 9:58:00 PM
    Hi Dave, I hope you start writing again one day soon. Merry Christmas and all the best in the coming new year. Hugs

  1. Date: 12/20/2014 6:19:00 AM
    - Hey .... a Christmas smile to you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas, David - // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/6/2014 8:06:00 AM
    This is an amazing motivational write, David. I suffer from depression, and it is so easy to want to give up at times. This poem brings the conviction that I must keep on keeping on. God bless. Thank you for your kind visit to my work.

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 4:26:00 PM
    Such a well said poem. Very nice.

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 12:15:00 AM
    A well written message that all should heed and you have presented it very nicely. Thank you for sharing this piece.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 9:14:00 PM
    Your optimism shines through clearly. Very nice David. Hopefully you'll pass back through soon:)

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 3:35:00 AM
    David, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 2:30:00 PM
    Well done! You hit it right on. Allan

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 12:46:00 PM
    My first time here I believe... it won't be my last! Nicely done!

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Wow!!! What a nice poem. I really liked it and the rhyming was great!! Well done!! Karla~

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:57:00 PM
    I almost believ things might get better but I seem to wallow in stuff that just won't end. This says what I often feel David. Ceck your soup mail.

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:15:00 PM
    what a nice one for Mike. GREAT poem and message. But I have to say, for me, things go wrong often, not seldom!!

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 4:01:00 PM
    Very encouraging words David xxx

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Nice poem... many of the words used in this poem are quite familiar some from quotations of famous speakers.

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:04:00 PM
    What and inspiring poem, David! Thank you and Mike for inspiring you to write relevant for today and always. I noticed that you haven't posted for a while. I hope you're doing well. I'll be praying for you and Mike. Take care and I'm sending a wish for a Blessed and Merry Christmas and New Year to you and your family! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Hope you are takingt this great advice - Soup mail David! :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:03:00 AM
    David, I just found your mail today and there is soup mail for you.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 3:06:00 PM
    Great poem with words of wisdom and a wonderful dedication to your brother! I do hope you'll be posting new poetry soon...thank you for your kind comments and compliments on my poem, A Woman's Only Friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm actually not bothered by people asking for money. It's the smoking in public places that gets under my skin especially when my young son is with me. We all have our pet peeved, I guess. Best wishes to you and yours. Love and Blessings, Rhonda