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from john to carolyn

you have been so very kind
so i write you this saying your on my mind
ours has been a special kind of bind
hearing from you helped me unwind

when i need prayer i drop you a line
or a word of encouragment you say it's fine
these three short years i've called you mine
and i still have yet to wine and dine

for this to end would be a crime
so don't let me have to drop a dime
lets keep this thing for all time
i'm just about to run out of rhyme

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  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:18:00 PM

    its monsoon time in mumbai but still hot and humid...its noise pollution and all sorts of pollution...you lucky to be having winter

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 12:28:00 PM

    Congrats. John on your special win, lovely tribute to a special lady, love,vie Also, I thank you for making me come out of my shell. xxx

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Congrats on your win in the "Gift Exchange" contest John iii. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 4:15:00 PM

    Wonderful poem for a wonderful lady. Congrats on your win. I am catching up but barely--i feel like a sinking ship and need a life raft to float. ha ha love phyl

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 9:15:00 AM

    Liked it first time around.Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 8:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your impressive win.

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 2:25:00 AM

    John congrats on your win, Happy New Year..David

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 10:38:00 PM

    Congratulation on your win in the Year 2012. Enjoyed. bl

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 8:23:00 PM

    Congratulations John x

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 7:40:00 PM

    JOHN, happy new year.. and CONGRATULATIONS ;-) on my gift exchange contest. Thank you for being part of the joy of giving another poet a poem from the bottom of your heart,, the best wishes to you and your family this 2012 year,..always p.d.

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 10:30:00 PM

    What a beauty in words for a very beautiful and wonderful Poet Carolyn. Great write my friend with so much of music and melody with a floating heart. It would be a great entry for PD's contest. My good wishes for your entry and thank you for liking 'A Song for You'. Hope you would like the Song (my experimental Video) on U Tube. With best wishes for a Happy New Year...Ravindra....John Loving iii

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 12:08:00 AM

    A great tribute to a wonderful poet and lady.Enjoyed very much.Thanks for your comment at my poem 'To Phyllis Babcock' from Kashinath'.I appreciate the fact that you took time to read my poem and leave a comment there.'

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 7:55:00 AM

    I would love to see you enter this one or another one in my contest... your a hearty person.. Thought of you...and was gonna ask you to join my contest... I'll come back later in today...p.d

    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 12/26/2011 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    your wish is my command.
  1. Date: 12/26/2011 7:30:00 AM

    Really enjoyed your rhyme John.. Awesome testimony of the gift friendship can really be ;)

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 7:21:00 AM

    Enjoyed your rhyme John, and thank you for the designs, love,vie