Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Poetrysoup

sajdah al-riyami Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Poetrysoup which was written by poet sajdah al-riyami. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by sajdah al-riyami

Best Sajdah Al-Riyami Poems

+ Fav Poet

Poetrysoup

It has been too long since my last rhyme
And how I missed the soup
In which each taste portrays the time
Of every cry,yell,laugh and whoop

Hey there fella
Get me under that
Umberella before it rains them dogs
And cats

Again? Foal thing!
I promise I wont leave you alone again
Like the last time you cringed
When I slowly let that rusty door open

Let me weep weep weep
While you rhyme rhyme rhyme
Oh ,how rich would I be
If I heard that with every dime!

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 4/4/2012 6:33:00 AM
    Saj...Geez I miss you <3....Anyway, about your poem, Its really cool (: I liked it a lot. Keep writing!

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 8/27/2012 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Still missing you Dear <3
  1. Date: 12/30/2011 4:42:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 10:34:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poem today. For one, it has really good rhyme and a decent meter. It really isn't all that bad considering you have just started writing. In fact I find it quite amusing to be honest. Poetrysoup is a fraternity of mature poets as well as novices like you and I. This means that we will receive appreciation, love, guidance as well as suggestions on poems. Criticism has only led to a marked improvement in my case. We are all a pool of knowledge and help to benefit each other. Given the nature of audience that visits this site of knowledge, it is my humble request to you to kindly keep conversations clean. Once again, I really liked your poem. Love and best wishes,

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 6:10:00 AM
    I enjoyed your poem this morning, it is not bad at all. Happy Holidays! Catie :)

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 4:56:00 AM
    Thats so rude and unnecessary Sylvia, I enjoyed your poem Sajdah so dont listen to her...Welcome back to soup :)