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I see beyond

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I see beyond

I see beyond your faults and just love you for who you are.
The little things you do when we are near or far...
I see beyond the tussle of our everyday strife,
And I thank God each day that you are a part of my life.

I see beyond the frustrations that linger each day,
And all the pain and heartache that have come our way.
I see beyond the dark clouds on a cold winter's night,
When it seems like hope is lost and nothing seems to be right.

I see beyond the troubles that rumble and roar...
For  you the hidden depths of my love will soar.
I see beyond all the cares of life that exist;
I chose you and we will be together in an eternal bliss.

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  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Its like a marriage thing. Congrats on your week win. Reneice

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 1/16/2012 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 12/26/2011 1:16:00 PM
    A very well written piece my dear. A beautiful insight into the heart of a poet. Always michael

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/26/2011 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Michael
  1. Date: 12/25/2011 9:21:00 PM
    Very nicely written with great descriptiveness and rhyming.

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/26/2011 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert
  1. Date: 12/25/2011 9:14:00 PM
    Lovely write Reneice, a poem I am glad to have read, hugs,vie

    McDonald Avatar Reneice McDonald
    Date: 12/26/2011 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vie ((hugs))