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Rusty Remnants

In a secret slot in my jewelry box
Lies half a silver locket
Battered…tattered…cherished

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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:53:00 PM

    Nat, stopping by to wish you a happy thanksgiving ,,, hope your day is well....xox~pd

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Natalie,congrats on your win.Loved it.Are you taking a break?

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:26:00 AM

    Awesome Kimo Natalie, congratulations on your win in the contest :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Very simply put. Nicely said Natalie

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 6:27:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Natalie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 9:39:00 PM

    NAT,, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN RICK'S CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:55:00 PM

    awww but not rusty! silver doesn't rust! congrad's light & love

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 6:49:00 PM

    Hey, did you win??????lol- Congrats to you my friend~God bless........I enjoyed!!~^Rick

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:13:00 PM

    We all have our treasures don't we Natalie. Congratulations

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:53:00 PM

    You said an awful lot in those three little lines. Beautiful. Mike

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 6:40:00 AM

    those are the BEST keepsakes! I diGG your poetry and your cool as a cucumber in a bowl uh' hot sauce comment! U rock out!

  1. Date: 1/1/2012 12:08:00 PM

    Gosh I love this Natalie :) Happy 2012 to you and your family :) Wilma

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 3:27:00 AM

    And I bet this rusty ole silver locket has MAJOR sentimental value! I love that this poem is a short and quaint as the precious image of your locket..it speaks volumes..U won't need any luck in that contest. ;) Hey, I wanted to thank u for your coments on Marlboro Woman Is Gone...I am thrilled that YoUR mom quit smoking 10 yrs ago..damage is being reversed. That is for sure. Conversely, your friend who struggles financially will need a huge wake up call, right? Happy Holly days, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 8:14:00 AM

    Very nice Kimo here Natalie.Best wishes.

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 3:35:00 AM

    Natalie, like it, if this is for the rust contest, good luck, have a fab Christmas and New Year, love ..David