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The Wait is Over

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The Wait is Over

I know I'll always love her. Another love her as me, I'll always kind of wonder. She gave her heart to this man - told me I was the greatest. Never really believed her... but then she trashed the wait list. "Here" grabbing me by both wrists across the cheek a soft kiss. Hearts beating at a fast pace, merged as one with a slow dance. "What do you pray for?" "Chardonnay, Marvin Gaye, and some Romance!" She laughed out loud, shook her head - stared at the stars, and she said... I know I'll always love him. Another love him as me, I'll always kind of wonder. He gave his heart to this girl - told me I was the greatest. Never really believed him... but then he trashed the wait list.

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  1. Date: 1/18/2012 3:04:00 AM
    congratulations on your win, Corey :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 9:04:00 PM
    Intriguing write...Leaves much to the imagination...I see why its one of the weeks top poems...You tell a genuine story added with greater cultural references...Love the Marvin Gaye reference...The 'wait list' was a great metaphor. Fresh and dramatic..

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 5:02:00 PM
    GREAT READ

    Brown Avatar Corey Brown
    Date: 1/17/2012 8:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 1/17/2012 6:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Corey. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday

    Brown Avatar Corey Brown
    Date: 1/17/2012 8:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much
  1. Date: 1/16/2012 4:46:00 PM
    Anne, Thank you so much.

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:20:00 AM
    CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner Corey!! :) - oxox sending love