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Let there be Light

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Let there be Light

And God said let there be light and there was! Light so bright, Eve's hair shone and Adam's teeth twinkled! Light in the darkness of eternity lightening up trails never fully imagined (imagination having not yet been invented). Yep, ol' God he lit that fire 'neath Eve and Adam. And Adam got mad 'cause he thought that God had him in an impossible situation. “Who is this God who makes me feel like when a good lookin' woman offers me fruit off a tree I can't take it??” Adam got all rebellious. His bowels felt eerily jello-ish. He acted impulsively, set the course for humanity... too bad Adam didn't have a mother.

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  1. Date: 12/28/2011 10:37:00 PM
    Congrats. Enjoyed your write and win both, my friend. bl

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 9:52:00 AM
    Heya Nancy. Good one - poor Adam just needed a strong mother figure? Ha! Could go in many directions with this poem. Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest!

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 5:19:00 AM
    Congratulations Nancy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 8:04:00 PM
    this was very nice. I love that last part!! About how he should have had a mother. haha. (but then where would WE all be?) Congrats on your win, Nancy.

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 5:51:00 PM
    I like this Nancy. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 3:50:00 PM
    Awww everyone else was so serious and you KNOW how serious I am!! Sometimes I think I don't know what fun is?? anyway this was very funny and tickled my feminist bone! Congrad's On your win Light & love

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 7:42:00 PM
    I think its all academic...? or should i say not academic Nancy..! anyway enjoyed reading your thoughts today..!

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 6:07:00 AM
    Hey Nan perhaps you'd consisder re labeling this Verse [or sending me soup mail to explain the type of sonnet it is I know there are many types yet I don't see this as a asonnet?] It's a unique write and tickled my funny bone yet I like the verses labeled correctly for the reader. Happy Holy Days!

    Jones Avatar Nancy Jones
    Date: 12/22/2011 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Debbie, I'll send you a Soupmail to this effect, too... according to the Soup glossary of Forms of Poetry, a sonnets are "Lyric poems that are 14 lines that usually have one or more conventional rhyme schemes." It is a very broad definintion which I believe what I wrote fits. If you believe otherwise, please let me know why and I will re-assess, thanks and beauty days to ya :)
  1. Date: 12/21/2011 8:06:00 PM
    I love this

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 7:25:00 PM
    All this time, I've never once thought about Adam not having a mom. I like you. I just don't like what you do to my puddy brain. Girlfriend, and I mean this as a compliment, you're too smart for your own pants. LOL. I think I need tylenol. Hugs!

    Jones Avatar Nancy Jones
    Date: 12/21/2011 7:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sweetheart, I like you too. Go easy on the tylenol.
  1. Date: 12/21/2011 7:15:00 PM
    Hey now! It was Eve who gave the fruit to Adam.Don't be blaming it all on the man!Ha,ha,ha..But I suppose it was (HARD) walking around the garden looking at this beautiful woman all day. :oP haha

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 6:48:00 PM
    Your killing me Nancy, I wish to be in your mind for a day, how much fun I would have. Enjoyed the read, love,Vie p.s. you write like no other, I'm perplexed.