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A better life ahead

A better life ahead
Today I could be dead
In the ground somewhere
Breathing with no air
Thank you, to God I’m saying
And every night I’m praying
That I’m on the right away
To see another day
Amen, when I’m done
I think life should be fun
Even though it’s short, we said
“I pray to God to have
A better life ahead”

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:14:00 PM

    Nicely written. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:26:00 PM

    Darian, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 4:25:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your H M in my "Life These Days" (Bio Form)contest Darian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 12:04:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Faith Verses" contest Darian. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 11:27:00 AM

    I hope your prayers will be answered. It's all in good time, Darian. I have to tell myself that too, and stay thankful for what we already have! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 6:08:00 PM

    Amen, Darian.. Congratulations on a fine win in John's contest. God bless you and have a Happy New Year! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/29/2011 3:39:00 PM

    Darian, Merry Seasons and Happy new Reasonings in the New Year... I am honored that your chose to enter my contest... My hope is that you find honor in your placement. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/26/2011 5:57:00 PM

    Beautiful! Each word is perfect and so true. Thanks for this Always, Laura